Well dressed
a natty black suit, a red tie.
You spurt of glamour
shirt tidy white, ironed out-
you are the handsomeness tremor.
Beneath your natty black suit
you so desperately try to hide
your character, your rotten soul inside.
Your natty black suit can’t show
who you are only what you claim to be,
what you want others to see
and it’s easy for you
in this world
of natty beliefs.
via Daily Prompt: Natty
What an original way to look at things! Love the way each sentence has an edge to it. Great manner to show what is happening on the real world out there. Love your writing style too! All in all, a great poem. Hope to see more from you. Have hope, write on!
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Thank you on your honest opinion. Yeah you will see more from me as i write not for me but the world outside. π
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You are welcome. Will look forward to seeing your blogs π
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Amazing
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Great poem!
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