Natty black suit

Well dressed

a natty black suit, a red tie.

You spurt of glamour

shirt tidy white, ironed out-

you are the handsomeness tremor.

Beneath your natty black suit

you so desperately try to hide

your character, your rotten soul inside.

Your natty black suit can’t show

who you are only what you claim to be,

what you want others to see

and it’s easy for you

in this world

of natty beliefs.

via Daily Prompt: Natty


5 thoughts on “Natty black suit

  1. zeckrombryan

    What an original way to look at things! Love the way each sentence has an edge to it. Great manner to show what is happening on the real world out there. Love your writing style too! All in all, a great poem. Hope to see more from you. Have hope, write on!

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