Natty black suit

Well dressed

a natty black suit, a red tie.

You spurt of glamour

shirt tidy white, ironed out-

you are the handsomeness tremor.

Beneath your natty black suit

you so desperately try to hide

your character, your rotten soul inside.

Your natty black suit can’t show

who you are only what you claim to be,

what you want others to see

and it’s easy for you

in this world

of natty beliefs.

via Daily Prompt: Natty

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5 comments

  1. zeckrombryan · June 6

    What an original way to look at things! Love the way each sentence has an edge to it. Great manner to show what is happening on the real world out there. Love your writing style too! All in all, a great poem. Hope to see more from you. Have hope, write on!

    Liked by 1 person

    • World Imagined · June 6

      Thank you on your honest opinion. Yeah you will see more from me as i write not for me but the world outside. πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Maryum Khalid · June 6

    Amazing

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Great poem!

    Liked by 1 person

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